Ok, guys... Sorry it has been forever and a day since my last review...[I started this a while back, but I didn't get time to finish...]I was busy getting home from Japan, getting my car fixed, and now moving back up to my dorm...I'll take some time to update now. (This was guest-snarked as well, by my good friend kesenai_kaitou , because we had time to kill on the airplane. Her comments are in red...er...purple; I can't add them all, because a lot of them are based directly off of text that I really don't want to quote...)
On the menu today,
Arlong/Nami Fluffy Fic!
j/k, j/k... That's just what I thought when I saw the title, but believe me, this is probably just as bad.
Crime: I'm in love with a Merman!
Summary: Zoro finds himself falling for the younger brother of a crew member. Chapter 6 up(finally). R&R please!
Warnings: Mary Sue and Marty Sue, and they're siblings. Bad characterization, Bad grammar, Bad Dialogue; Good Lord, just bad everything.
Sabo-chan, lush that she is, started out this fic on some nice refreshing Sake. It soon became apparent, however, that she would need something a little stronger. Like tequila; Or, perhaps, whatever it is that the author was smoking.
Here we go, ( Ready, Set, Cipher!Collapse )